Personal Journeys
English 101 - sections OBS, OBC
Spring Quarter, 2008

Instructor:Rhonda Gilliam

E-mail: rgilliam@bcc.ctc.edu (M-F)

Office: C207-H*

Phone: (425) 564-2123*


* I work from home, so please make an appointment with me BEFORE you decide to meet with me in my office. Unless the VISTA server is down, the fastest way to contact me is to check the Who's Online chat function to see if I am online. The next fastest way is to send me an email using the e-mail tool on the class website. Please do not contact me at my BCC email address unless you have an emergency and cannot reach me on the class website. Only in this case should send an e-mail to my BCC address. You may also choose to leave me a message on my voice mail. If the return call is local, I will call you back; however, if the call is long distance from Vashon, I will have to wait until I am in the office to call you.

Required Texts:

Marius, Richard. A Writer's Companion. 4th edition. (ISBN: 0-07-304015-0)
Mortensen, Greg and David Oliver Relin. Three Cups of Tea. (ISBN: 0143-03825-7)
Obama, Barack. Dreams from My Father. (ISBN:1-4000-8277-3)
Tempest-Williams, Terry. Refuge. (ISBN: 0679-74024-4)


Introductory Remarks

English 101 is a completely online class; you are NOT required to attend classroom sessions. However, English 101 is NOT a correspondence course, completed on your own timetable in isolation. You must participate in this course in an ongoing manner to successfully fulfill the requirements of the course.

This online course will require you to have some particular attributes and skills:

Many students mistakenly believe that writing is a talent, gifted to everyone else. But writing is not a single task, accomplished in isolation. Writing is a skill, developed with practice in reading texts, analyzing texts, thinking through the texts and finally, writing these ideas down in a coherent and interesting manner. Anyone with enough determination and effort can learn to communicate effectively in writing. This class is designed to use writing, in the form of an academic college essay, to improve your written communication skills as well as your critical reading and thinking skills. Some students probably have a measure of these skills already; some students may be better at some skills and feel less comfortable with the others. Whatever your abilities before now, I ask you to approach the class with compassion and tolerance for yourself and for each other.

If you signed up for this course thinking that it would have less work than a course in the classroom, you were mistaken. Any online course has more writing work than a class in the classroom as all of our communication must be written. Please be advised that the workload may be very difficult for you if work and/or family demands do not allow you a minimum of two to three uninterrupted hours every weekday to work on the assignments for this class. I have tried to focus and space assignments to facilitate as many learning styles as possible, but you may need to schedule extra time, especially around paper writing/editing time, depending on your ability to read or write.

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Student Responsibilities

Because of the special method of course delivery, several requirements must be met.

  1. First and probably most important, the student enrolled in this course MUST have a computer and required software and services, including a word processor (Office 97 or better minimum), an Internet Service Provider (avoid AOL), and a browser service (Netscape Communicator 4.7 or Internet Explorer 6.1 work best). Perhaps more importantly, the student must be familiar with the use of the above-mentioned items. If you are using the brand new Windows Vista, please let me know immediately if you encounter any problems. Whatever web browser you use, be sure to upgrade to the newest version. I do not teach computer skills; I teach English. I will help if I can, but I am no expert in computer systems.
  2. In order to use our class website effectively, you MUST set up your computer to the appropriate specifications. Check out that information by clicking on the "Run a Browser Check" link on the "Log In" page, to the right of the box where you enter your username and password.
  3. Always keep me informed if you have problems with the technology, and I will try to find help for you. However, I expect that you bring some expertise with you to help in solving problems that arise. Ultimately, your computer and internet services are your responsibility. If you are signed up for the OAS or OBS section and you have computer problems, you may use the computer labs on the BCC campus if you have an emergency.

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My Expectations:

As you know, every teacher has expectations. These are mine.

  1. I expect that you signed up for this course because you want to learn to read, think, and write critically. We call that formal academic writing. Therefore, I expect that you will complete the work I have created to teach you these skills.
  2. I expect that you have come to this class with a working usage of modern English grammar as English 101 does not teach grammar. I may suggest additional non-graded work for students who struggle with grammar. I set aside a segment of our website to provide a grammar and mechanics help area, complete with exercises; use it if you have these problems. I encourage you to schedule an appointment in my office or utilize the Writing lab's virtual tutor or go to A262 (Writing Lab) on campus for help with grammar problems. All papers with major grammatical errors lose points in this class. See the Major Grammar Errors page in the Mechanics area under the Resources and Tool link for help in identifying these errors.
  3. I expect that you will participate in ALL class activities, including peer reviews, Marius seminars, and literature discussions. Failure to participate in these areas may cause you to fail the course, even if your formal written papers are passing.
  4. I expect that the final grade for your portfolio will be a C-(70) or better to move to English 201, 270, 271 or 272. In addition, you must submit all formal papers and the final completed portfolio in order to move forward.
  5. I expect that you will take care to back up your papers and other assignments and/or store them on your hard drive AND a CD or portable drive. It is your responsibility to keep track of this material--not mine. If some computer catastrophe should occur, you will still be responsible for producing the work by the due date in order to get a grade. Be careful--save and back your work up regularly!
  6. I expect that you will show respect to everyone by responding to e-mail and discussion postings in a way that is not judgmental, degrading, or derogatory. Even though you may disagree with the interpretations of others, please use some self-restraint and compassion in responding to others' ideas. Logical and questioning responses are encouraged. Choose your words and the tone of your message with utmost care. I also expect tolerance for others' abilities and learning styles.
  7. LATE WORK: I expect each revised draft will be attached to assignment dropbox link provided in each module. These submissions must be made by the date shown on the class calendar. Revised papers submitted after that date will lose 5 points per 24 hour period that they are late. To avoid losing points for late work, do not wait until the last minute to submit your work. Start early. Sometimes the technology takes longer than you think. Points for submitting your work late will be deducted from your Total Points for the class. I will not accept Portfolios more than 48 hours after the due date posted on the class calendar.
  8. I expect honesty. I expect that you will neither do work for others nor use work done by others. Cheating and/or plagiarizing will not be tolerated. Plagiarizing is cheating, as is copying answers on a test, glancing at nearby test papers, swapping papers, buying papers, using ideas from other sources without proper documentation, writing papers for others, or having them written for you. BCC utilizes a plagiarism detection software, and I use it for random spots checks. Plus, if I even remotely suspect your paper sounds plagiarized, I will submit it to this site. If you cheat or plagiarize, the following actions will be taken:
  9. Personal conferences on your paper can be held in my office if you can/want to come to the campus and we can work out a mutually convenient time; otherwise, e-mail or local phone conferences can be held. Please contact me first to set up an appointment BEFORE coming to the campus.

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Learning Outcomes

According to the English department at BCC, by the end of the quarter, you should be able to:

I have designed writing and reading assignments that require you to practice the necessary skills to help you achieve these outcomes. I have designed discussions of our literary texts and our rhetoric (Marius) which will guide you to develop reading, writing and critical thinking skills. Likewise, some of our paper assignments will depend on your use of these skills in order to complete them successfully.

In reading, discussion and writing assignments, you will be guided to develop the following reading skills:

In the formal writing assignments, you will be required to:

(Please see the Resources & Tools/Composition Skills page for more information on the skills listed above).

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What do I have to do for this course?

Formal Papers/Portfolios: You are required to write 3 original formal academic papers (750-1200 words) in this class. The process for writing, revising and submitting work is on a tight timeline. Even though I accept late papers (up to 3 days late), failure to meet the deadlines will put you at a disadvantage. We will follow this process for all papers, except the practice paper project.

  1. You will compose an original draft on your computer, then revise it yourself to get rid of errors that are obvious to you.
  2. You will POST this original, self-revised and self-edited draft of each paper to the discussion area in the appropriate peer review forum by the date on the calendar. This draft MUST be copied/pasted into a message composed in the correct forum. If you expect to get help on your papers, you must post them by the deadline for posting your paper to the review area. Papers posted later in the review process may get overlooked.
  3. While you wait for comments on your paper, you will give peer comments on two other classmates' papers. The peer review process is described in detail under Resources & Tools/How to?/Peer Review Instructions. Please take care to spread your comments around; if one paper already has two sets of review comments, please choose another paper to review. Don't leave anyone out.
  4. After giving comments, collect your comments and revise your paper. Then, using the editing tool provided under Resources & Tools/Evaluation Tools, thoroughly edit your paper before submitting it to me by the date and time listed on the calendar. Please take the time to proofread your work.
  5. Directions for submitting your revised draft are posted in the Resources & Tools/FAQ/How to Submit an Assignment.
  6. For the commenting process, I will provide brief written comments on the revised draft of all formal papers, including specific grammar comments. However, I will provide fewer grammar comments for each subsequent paper. The reason for this change is that I do not want you to be dependent on me to point out grammar errors; I cannot follow you around for the rest of your life and show you these mistakes. If you are still making these kinds of errors, now is the time to learn how to find and correct them for yourself. The website contains tools to help you achieve this goal. Please let me know if I can assist you in any way.

You will also receive a grading rubric that offers another evaluation of your work. The grading tools I use in this class are posted under Resources & Tools/Evaluation Tools.  All rubrics correlate with the posted Grading Standards and the Outcomes for a Good Essay. Check them out as you prepare your paper to better understand what I am looking for in your work.

Portfolios:

Your final portfolio shows me your ability to write. Though writing can always be further revised and edited, I consider your portfolio your best work: the final product of a quarter's worth of hard work. Therefore, the portfolio for this class is critically important to successfully completing this class. All other assignments in this class--literature discussions and peer review assignments--are structured to help you improve your thinking, writing and revising skills, so that you can produce an excellent final product for the portfolio assignment.

To prepare your portfolio, you will include all three formal papers that you have revised and edited according to comments received from Sasja, writing tips you have learned from the Marius text, the grading standards, and Outcomes for a Good Essay. Use all of these tools to improve your writing. Portfolios allow you the opportunity to improve your skills before your paper gets an actual grade. Specific instructions on how to prepare your portfolio are given under the Portfolio icon posted on the homepage. (The practice paper cannot be included in your portfolio.)

Peer Review Assignments: Much of what you will learn about writing in this course will come from participating in a peer review of others' papers. To do these reviews, you will be required to read selections from the Marius text and use the assigned peer review tool to critique the work of other students. Do not fail to participate in this area of the course. See the Peer Instructions link located under Resources & Tools/How To? for specific instructions on how to complete this critical work! In general, to participate successfully in peer review, you will complete these tasks:

(1) You will analyze and evaluate two other students' papers using a Peer Review Tool that is posted both in the specific paper module and under Resources & Tools/How to?/Peer Review Instructions. You MUST use this assessment tool in order to earn full credit for comments on student papers. Furthermore, your evaluation must be thorough; I expect around 200-250 words per peer review as a minimum; though certainly, better reviews may have more words. More information on the peer review assignment and my grading practices for this assignment are posted under the Resources & Tools/How to?/Peer Review Instructions.

(2) After you have analyzed and evaluated each student paper, copy-and-paste your evaluation of each paper as a REPLY to the paper you reviewed in the peer review forum on the discussion board. This work must be completed by the deadline posted on the class calendar. I have set aside two class days for this work; do not fail to do it. If you fail to follow these guidelines, you will NOT receive full credit for your work.

Discussions/Homework:

I have created an individual forum in the discussion area for weekly discussions on the literature texts as well as the Marius Homework assignments. Specific instructions and requirements for participating in discussions are posted in the module for our first paper as well as under the Resources & Tools icon. Find the Seminar Discussion Requirements page for specific information on discussions. (Hint** It is located in the module for the second book/first formal paper.)  I do my best to participate in the discussion; however, I cannot possibly respond to every comment or answer.

Total points available -- Literature discussions (20 pts. each X 3 discussions) total 60 points. Marius Homework (15 pts each X 5 homework assignments) total 60 pointsl.

TOTAL POINTS FOR THE COURSE= 910 points

* NOTE.To figure out your grade at any time, simply divide the total points you have earned by the total points you have submitted to that point. I use standard percentage markings:

94-100% = A, 90-93% = A-, 87-89% = B+, 84-86% = B, 80-83% = B-, and so on. . .

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How do we communicate with each other?

In the course toolbar to the left of each page, you will find links to class announcements, your mailbox, the class discussion area, the assignment dropbox, the weblinks area and your personal gradebook. All relevant links to specific discussions, weblinks, and assignment submission areas are also located in the relevant module. When new information has been posted to any of these areas, you will see a green square with a white star on the name of the tool.

You are responsible for posting the discussion messages into the correct area depending on its purpose. You must also handle the postings, downloading messages you wish to keep to your home computer and creating folders to store that information. Please do save any messages you wish to keep.

You are responsible for posting the discussion messages into the correct area depending on its purpose. You must also handle the postings, downloading messages you wish to keep to your home computer and creating folders to store that information. Please do save any messages you wish to keep.

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