Personal
Journeys
English
101 - sections OBS, OBC
Spring
Quarter, 2008
* I work from home, so please make an appointment
with me BEFORE you decide to meet with me in my office. Unless the VISTA server
is down, the fastest way to contact me is to check the Who's Online chat function
to see if I am online. The next fastest way is to send me an email using the e-mail
tool on the class website. Please do not contact me at my BCC email address unless
you have an emergency and cannot reach me on the class website. Only in this case
should send an e-mail to my BCC address. You may also choose to leave me a message
on my voice mail. If the return call is local, I will call you back; however,
if the call is long distance from Vashon, I will have to wait until I am in the
office to call you.
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Required
Texts:
Marius,
Richard. A Writer's Companion. 4th edition. (ISBN: 0-07-304015-0)
Mortensen, Greg and David Oliver Relin. Three Cups of Tea. (ISBN:
0143-03825-7)
Obama, Barack. Dreams from My Father. (ISBN:1-4000-8277-3)
Tempest-Williams, Terry. Refuge. (ISBN: 0679-74024-4)
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Introductory
Remarks
English
101 is a completely online class; you are NOT required to attend
classroom sessions. However, English 101 is NOT a correspondence course, completed
on your own timetable in isolation. You must participate in this course in an
ongoing manner to successfully fulfill the requirements of the course.
This
online course will require you to have some particular attributes and skills:
- college
level reading and comprehension skills,
- good
self-motivation,
- good
problem solving skills,
- the
ability to communicate clearly in writing,
- the
ability to learn well in a totally visual medium,
- the
ability to follow written directions,
and
- the
ability to use your computer to complete various tasks, including (but not
limited to) uploading and downloading files as well as attaching files to
e-mail messages and in the assignment dropbox as required, and
- the
ability to ask questions as needed.
Many
students mistakenly believe that writing is a talent, gifted to everyone else.
But writing is not a single task, accomplished in isolation. Writing is a skill,
developed with practice in reading texts, analyzing texts, thinking through
the texts and finally, writing these ideas down in a coherent and interesting
manner. Anyone with enough determination and effort can learn to communicate
effectively in writing. This class is designed to use writing, in the form of
an academic college essay, to improve your written communication skills as well
as your critical reading and thinking skills. Some students probably have a
measure of these skills already; some students may be better at some skills
and feel less comfortable with the others. Whatever your abilities before now,
I ask you to approach the class with compassion and tolerance for yourself and
for each other.
If
you signed up for this course thinking that it would have less work than a course
in the classroom, you were mistaken. Any online course has more
writing work than a class in the classroom as all of our communication must
be written. Please be advised that the workload may be very difficult for you
if work and/or family demands do not allow you a minimum
of two to three uninterrupted hours every weekday to work on the assignments
for this class. I have tried to focus and space assignments to facilitate as
many learning styles as possible, but you may need to schedule extra time, especially
around paper writing/editing time, depending on your ability to read or write.
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Student
Responsibilities
Because
of the special method of course delivery, several requirements must be met.
- First
and probably most important, the student enrolled in this course MUST have
a computer and required software and services, including a word processor
(Office 97 or better minimum), an Internet Service Provider (avoid AOL), and
a browser service (Netscape Communicator 4.7 or Internet Explorer 6.1 work
best). Perhaps more importantly, the student must be familiar with the use
of the above-mentioned items. If you are using the brand new Windows Vista,
please let me know immediately if you encounter any problems. Whatever web
browser you use, be sure to upgrade to the newest version. I do not
teach computer skills; I teach English. I will help if I can, but I am no
expert in computer systems.
- In
order to use our class website effectively, you MUST set up your computer
to the appropriate specifications. Check out that information by clicking
on the "Run a Browser Check" link on the "Log In" page, to the right of the
box where you enter your username and password.
- Always
keep me informed if you have problems with the technology, and I will try
to find help for you. However, I expect that you bring some expertise with
you to help in solving problems that arise. Ultimately, your computer and
internet services are your responsibility. If you are signed up for the OAS
or OBS section and you have computer problems, you may use the computer labs
on the BCC campus if you have an emergency.
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My
Expectations:
As
you know, every teacher has expectations. These are mine.
- I
expect that you signed up for this course because you want to learn to read,
think, and write critically. We call that formal academic writing. Therefore,
I expect that you will complete the work I have created to teach you these
skills.
- I
expect that you have come to this class with a working usage of modern English
grammar as English 101 does not teach grammar. I may suggest additional non-graded
work for students who struggle with grammar. I set aside a segment of our
website to provide a grammar and mechanics help area, complete with exercises;
use it if you have these problems. I encourage you to schedule an appointment
in my office or utilize the Writing lab's virtual tutor or go to A262 (Writing
Lab) on campus for help with grammar problems. All papers with major grammatical
errors lose points in this class. See the Major Grammar Errors page in the
Mechanics area under the Resources and Tool link for help in identifying these
errors.
- I
expect that you will participate in ALL class activities, including peer reviews,
Marius seminars, and literature discussions. Failure to participate in these
areas may cause you to fail the course, even if your formal written papers
are passing.
- I
expect that the final grade for your portfolio will be a C-(70) or better
to move to English 201, 270, 271 or 272. In addition, you must submit all
formal papers and the final completed portfolio
in order to move forward.
- I
expect that you will take care to back up your papers and other assignments
and/or store them on your hard drive AND
a CD or portable drive. It is your responsibility to keep track of this material--not
mine. If some computer catastrophe should occur, you will still be responsible
for producing the work by the due date in order to get a grade. Be careful--save
and back your work up regularly!
- I
expect that you will show respect to everyone by responding to e-mail and
discussion postings in a way that is not
judgmental, degrading, or derogatory. Even though you may disagree with the
interpretations of others, please use some self-restraint and compassion in
responding to others' ideas. Logical and questioning responses are encouraged.
Choose your words and the tone of your message with utmost care. I also expect
tolerance for others' abilities and learning styles.
- LATE
WORK: I expect each revised draft will be attached to assignment dropbox
link provided in each module. These submissions must be made by the date shown
on the class calendar. Revised papers submitted after that date will lose
5 points per 24 hour period that they are late. To avoid losing points for
late work, do not wait until the last minute to submit your work. Start early.
Sometimes the technology takes longer than you think. Points
for submitting your work late will be deducted from your Total Points for
the class. I
will not accept Portfolios more than 48 hours after the due date posted on
the class calendar.
- I
expect honesty. I expect that you will neither do work for others nor use
work done by others. Cheating and/or plagiarizing will not be tolerated. Plagiarizing
is cheating, as is copying answers on a test, glancing at nearby test papers,
swapping papers, buying papers, using ideas from other sources without proper
documentation, writing papers for others, or having them written for you.
BCC utilizes a plagiarism detection software, and I use it for random spots
checks. Plus, if I even remotely suspect your paper sounds plagiarized, I
will submit it to this site. If you cheat or plagiarize, the following actions
will be taken:
- You
will receive a grade of "0" on the work (period).
- A
report of the incident will be filed in the Dean of Students' Office.
This report may become part of your permanent record or the Dean may choose
to pursue further disciplinary action.
- Personal
conferences on your paper can be held in my office if you can/want to come
to the campus and we can work out a mutually convenient time; otherwise, e-mail
or local phone conferences can be held. Please contact me first to set up
an appointment BEFORE coming to the campus.
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Learning
Outcomes
According
to the English department at BCC, by the end of the quarter, you should be able
to:
- Demonstrate
various invention practices: brainstorming, free writing; outlining, journaling.
- Demonstrate
ability to write in various modes: personal narrative, expository, analytical,
descriptive, argument.
- Demonstrate
the phases of writing: draft, revision, final copy.
- Explore
sources of writing: reading, thinking, analyzing, discussion.
- Create
a thesis statement focuses the paper, does not point out the obvious, and
is written as a single sentence.
- Develop
and include enough details and examples to support the identified thesis and
reinforce focus.
- Demonstrate
various patterns of organization and use the organization pattern that suits
your identified purpose & audience.
- Illustrate
the concept of Audience in your writing.
- Artfully
combine Audience, Purpose, and Tone in compositions written in and outside
of class.
- Write
in a vocabulary appropriate to your subject and identified audience.
- Begin
and conclude a paper effectively.
- Show
effective control of mechanics: paragraphing, punctuation, spelling.
- Differentiate
between key ideas and supporting details in reading.
- Locate
the thesis statement in reading assignments.
- Practice
good group skills: how to give useful feedback and how to make use of feedback
you receive.
- Develop
self-assessment skills.
I
have designed writing and reading assignments that require you to practice the
necessary skills to help you achieve these outcomes. I have designed discussions
of our literary texts and our rhetoric (Marius) which will guide you to develop
reading, writing and critical thinking skills. Likewise, some of our paper assignments
will depend on your use of these skills in order to complete them successfully.
In
reading, discussion and writing assignments, you will be guided to develop the
following reading skills:
- understand
literal meaning of text
- make
reasonable inferences and offer support for them
- analyze,
evaluate and interpret complex material
- demonstrate
synthesis of multiple texts
- differentiate
your personal opinions and assumptions from another's
- apply
a disciplinary framework to the text
In
the formal writing assignments, you will be required to:
- use
a variety of prewriting methods to develop ideas and organize a writing plan.
- revise,
edit, and proofread papers (both on and off the computer) until the final
submitted draft shows the
skill and effort you have put into it.
- write
for a specific audience with a specific purpose, as assigned, using an appropriate
voice and tone.
- build
a complex, but coherent paper around your own thoughts and analyses.
- use
a single, well-stated sentence that clearly expresses the central idea of
your essay, focuses your topic, and controls ideas to the point of creating
unity.
- connect
paragraphs to the thesis and to each other; produce a smooth flow of ideas
using appropriate coherence techniques.
- construct
unified paragraphs that develop and support the main idea with specific examples
and concrete details.
- write
essays with effective introductions and conclusions.
- construct
clear, grammatically correct sentences of precise and appropriate words.
- understand
and apply subordination and coordination in sentences to emphasize important
ideas.
- be
able to self-assess.
(Please
see the Resources & Tools/Composition Skills page for more information on
the skills listed above).
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What
do I have to do for this course?
Formal
Papers/Portfolios: You are required to write 3 original formal academic
papers (750-1200 words) in this class. The process for writing, revising and
submitting work is on a tight timeline. Even though I accept late papers (up
to 3 days late), failure to meet the deadlines will put you at a disadvantage.
We will follow this process for all papers, except the practice paper project.
- You
will compose an original draft on your computer, then revise it yourself to
get rid of errors that are obvious to you.
- You
will POST this original, self-revised and self-edited draft
of each paper to the discussion area in the appropriate peer review forum
by the date on the calendar. This draft MUST be copied/pasted
into a message composed in the correct forum. If you expect to get help on
your papers, you must post them by the deadline for posting your paper
to the review area. Papers posted later in the review process may
get overlooked.
- While
you wait for comments on your paper, you will give peer comments on two other
classmates' papers. The peer review process is described in detail under Resources
& Tools/How to?/Peer Review Instructions. Please take care to spread your
comments around; if one paper already has two sets of review comments, please
choose another paper to review. Don't leave anyone out.
- After
giving comments, collect your comments and revise your paper. Then, using
the editing tool provided under Resources & Tools/Evaluation Tools, thoroughly
edit your paper before submitting it to me by the date and time listed on
the calendar. Please take the time to proofread your work.
- Directions
for submitting your revised draft are posted in the Resources & Tools/FAQ/How
to Submit an Assignment.
- For the commenting process, I
will provide brief written comments on the revised draft of all formal papers,
including specific grammar comments. However, I will provide fewer grammar
comments for each subsequent paper. The reason for this change is that I do
not want you to be dependent on me to point out grammar errors; I cannot follow
you around for the rest of your life and show you these mistakes. If you are
still making these kinds of errors, now is the time to learn how to find and
correct them for yourself. The website contains tools to help you achieve
this goal. Please let me know if I can assist you in any way.
You
will also receive a grading rubric that offers another evaluation of your work.
The grading tools I use in this class are posted under Resources & Tools/Evaluation
Tools. All rubrics correlate with the posted Grading Standards and the Outcomes
for a Good Essay. Check
them out as you prepare your paper to better understand what I am looking for
in your work.
Portfolios:
Your
final portfolio shows me your ability to write. Though writing can always be
further revised and edited, I consider your portfolio your best work: the final
product of a quarter's worth of hard work. Therefore, the portfolio for this
class is critically important to successfully completing this class. All other
assignments in this class--literature discussions and peer review assignments--are
structured to help you improve your thinking, writing and revising skills, so
that you can produce an excellent final product for the portfolio assignment.
To
prepare your portfolio, you will include all three formal papers that you have
revised and edited according to comments received from Sasja, writing tips you
have learned from the Marius text, the grading standards, and Outcomes for a Good
Essay. Use all of these tools to improve your writing. Portfolios allow you the
opportunity to improve your skills before your paper gets an actual grade. Specific
instructions on how to prepare your portfolio are given under the Portfolio icon
posted on the homepage. (The practice paper cannot be included in your portfolio.)
- Your
Portfolio will be graded based on the standards posted under the Grading Standards
link (see Resources & Tools/Evaluation Tools).
- Your
Portfolio is worth 700 points. Each of the three essays is worth 200 points.
The self-evaluation is worth 100 points.
- You
MUST score higher than a C-
on the Portfolio to move to the next course in the English composition sequence.
If your portfolio scores lower than a C-, points earned for the other work
(discussions, homework, and peer review) will not be considered to raise the
grade to a "passing" mark. This class is a composition class; therefore, the
formal papers as presented in the portfolio are the best indication of your
ability to write.
- Total
Paper/Portfolio available -- (700 points)
Peer
Review Assignments: Much of what you will learn about writing in this
course will come from participating in a peer review of others' papers. To do
these reviews, you will be required to read selections from the Marius text
and use the assigned peer review tool to critique the work of other students.
Do not fail to participate in this area of the course. See the Peer Instructions
link located under Resources & Tools/How To? for specific instructions on
how to complete this critical work! In general, to participate successfully
in peer review, you will complete these tasks:
(1)
You will analyze and evaluate two other students' papers using a Peer Review
Tool that is posted both in the specific paper module and under Resources
& Tools/How to?/Peer Review Instructions. You MUST
use this assessment tool in order to earn full credit for comments on student
papers. Furthermore, your evaluation must be thorough; I expect around 200-250
words per peer review as a minimum; though certainly, better reviews may
have more words. More information on the peer review assignment and my grading
practices for this assignment are posted under the Resources & Tools/How
to?/Peer Review Instructions.
(2)
After you have analyzed and evaluated each student paper, copy-and-paste
your evaluation of each paper as a REPLY to the paper you reviewed in the
peer review forum on the discussion board. This work must be completed by
the deadline posted on the class calendar. I have set aside two class
days for this work; do not fail to do it. If you fail to follow these guidelines,
you will NOT receive full credit for your work.
- You
will be required to participate in peer review for Papers 1, 2, and 3 for
at least two of your peers. For completing this task per
my directions, you will receive 30 points per review assignment
(15 points for each review). REMEMBER reviews must posted
in the proper review forum by the due date and time posted on the calendar
or they will receive ZERO points. I will not accept late peer reviews...period.
- Though
I have also created a Portfolio Workshop forum, you are not required to post
your paper there or to give comments on papers posted there. I have created
the forum for voluntary use; I will not award points for reviews done on papers
posted in the Portfolio Workshop area. However, learning how to recognize
good/weak writing is an important skill when learning to write more effectively.
I encourage you to work on your analytical skills by giving help whenever
and wherever you can. I will also participate by offering comments in this
forum during the Portfolio Workshop at the end of the quarter.
- Total
Points for Peer Review: (90 points)
Discussions/Homework:
I
have created an individual forum in the discussion area for weekly discussions
on the literature texts as well as the Marius Homework assignments. Specific
instructions and requirements for participating in discussions are posted in
the module for our first paper as well as under the Resources & Tools icon.
Find the Seminar Discussion Requirements page for specific information on discussions.
(Hint** It is located in the module for the second book/first formal
paper.) I do my best to participate in the discussion; however, I cannot possibly
respond to every comment or answer.
Total
points available -- Literature discussions (20 pts. each X 3 discussions) total
60 points. Marius Homework (15 pts
each X 5 homework assignments) total 60 pointsl.
- Total
discussion/homework points: (120 points)
TOTAL
POINTS FOR THE COURSE= 910 points
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NOTE.To figure out your grade at any time, simply divide the total points you
have earned by the total points you have submitted to that point. I use standard
percentage markings:
94-100%
= A, 90-93% = A-, 87-89% = B+, 84-86% = B, 80-83% = B-, and so on. . .
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How
do we communicate with each other?
In
the course toolbar to the left of each page, you will find links to class announcements,
your mailbox, the class discussion area, the assignment dropbox, the weblinks
area and your personal gradebook. All relevant links to specific discussions,
weblinks, and assignment submission areas are also located in the relevant module.
When new information has been posted to any of these areas, you will see a green
square with a white star on the name of the tool.
- Announcements
will be posted for you as needed throughout the quarter. Please read these
announcements carefully so that you will know of any important changes or
issues in the class.
- The
Discussion area provides a
place for asynchronous discussions of course materials. The discussion area
has several categories which contain links that have a specific assignment
or purpose. Class Communication, Composition, and Literature Discussions.
- Class
Communication:
- Post
Your Introduction - This area is where you introduce yourself to your
classmates. The questions for posting this introduction are given
on the Getting Started page.
- The
Student Union - This area is for student-to-student discussion.
For example, you may post announcements here if you wish to petition
your classmates to join you in a face-to-face discussion group or
a chat room discussion. However, be aware that I do not read this
forum regularly; therefore, do not
post questions for me here.
- Questions
for Instructor area - Post questions for me in this area if
you think that others in the class may benefit from knowing the answer
to your question. I will check this area at
least twice per weekday, (morning and afternoon) if not more.
However, if your question is of a very personal nature, please use
my website mailbox.
- Composition
Homework
- Practice
Paper Project - These numbered links will house all of our
discussions work on the Practice paper.
- Peer
Review area - These 3 areas are named by paper number. Here
is where you will post your revised drafts and comments for your peer
review assignments.
- Portfolio
Workshop - This area is for student-to-student and student-to-instructor
help with revising your papers for your portfolio.
- Literature
discussion -
- Literature
discussion fora-- These areas will house your discussion about
our literature readings. Each forum is listed with the author's last
name or the assignment. Please follow the dates on the class calendar
for posting questions and for commenting. I have allowed time for
you to do this work; don't fail to do it before the deadlines posted
on the class calendar.
You
are responsible for posting the discussion messages into the correct area depending
on its purpose. You must also handle the postings, downloading messages you
wish to keep to your home computer and creating folders to store that information.
Please do save any messages you wish to keep.
- A
mailbox has been provided
for private e-mail communication between you and I or you and other classmates.
Since I get between 40 and 50 e-mail messages every day at my various work
addresses, I will appreciate "URGENT" notices in the subject line, if you
have a real emergency. I check my class email first thing in the morning and
sometime in around mid to late afternoon in order to respond in a timely manner
to all messages, whether or not they are urgent. Please do not use e-mail
to submit your work unless you have contacted me for approval FIRST.
- The
Who's Online Tool will show
you who, in our class, is online at the same time as you are. One handy feature
of this tool is that you can request a chat with whomever is online at the
same time. This tool is particularly helpful if you have a question for me
and I am online. Please feel free to use it to ask any questions that you
may have.
- The
Chat room is a great place
to have real time conversations with your classmates or with me. I do not
require that you use this room, but it is available if you wish to use it
for discussing anything about our class. Just so you know--a transcript of
all conversations posted in this area are available to me and BCC course administrators
if we wish to read them. I tend not to read them, but I want you to know that
your conversations here are recorded.
- The
My Grades link will take you
to the gradebook for this class. This area will contain all of the grades
for your work WHEN I have completed the grading.
You
are responsible for posting the discussion messages into the correct area depending
on its purpose. You must also handle the postings, downloading messages you
wish to keep to your home computer and creating folders to store that information.
Please do save any messages you wish to keep.
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